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Again, this is just for school so not exactly my best work.
A girl waiting in the rain to cross the street to go to school.
Id really love some critique on water ! and/or rain!

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~mosspluse May 5, 2009 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

okay- here's a critique you asked for...
the water is VERY GOOD!

*dreams of summer = swimming*
the rain is good, but you might not want to have so much of it. longer, more separated ones would work well, too.

lurv the outfit!! shiny raincoat!! =^_^=

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~t-o-p-a May 5, 2009

thanks! you da bomb! ill do that next time!

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